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And you thought I was kidding didn't you Kay?

But yes, this was a request from dear dear ~undashable. I said I wanted to draw smut and she suggested IsisxNadia hate sex. It isn't sex persay....but oh well.

Any more requests?

Nadia(against the wall) and art belongs to ~lunarmaddnesslives6
Isis(Ms. Topless) belongs to ~undashable

Also Kay, since I don't really have a good idea about how Isis looks, please refrain from getting upset. I'm sure about the face, hair, and ear though. :lol:

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:iconundashable:
I HAVE CRITIQUING TO DO NOW!

*Ahem* Now that my spastic moment is over...

Isis's hair is a bit too long. She keeps it short mostly in spite of her grandmother's request of keeping it long like a lady should. The hand... I'm not going to say anything about it. I think you know other than the fact it is much too big. Now! Isis is short, very short. Now, what is up with her pants? If someone's pants were really like that, they would've fallen down. Secondly about the pants, Isis doesn't wear baggy pants, she wears fitted cargos. Isis's tail isn't fluffy. Her's is like a shorthaired cat's, but comes to the knees. She also has many ringlets on her back and a bald spot on her right shoulder.

Now, about the artwork itself. It's fine, other than the hand and the pants. The handcuffs don't look right, a little bit off though I don't know what. Now, what is with Nadia's boobs? Seriously. They look misshapen.

Ta-ta for now. Son can probably critique it better than I can.

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98% of deviants don't know the difference between 'your' and 'you're'.
If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch the 98% in the face, put this in your signature.

I want to hurt those people...

I go on gaia and fanfiction too.
:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
....

Gawd.

lol

Got ya about Isis. Like I said...DIDN'T KNOW ANYTHING REALLY 8D Gotta know though...how does her mouth look?

Bah, I was too lazy to get a picture of handcuffs. And Nady's chest? I..really don't know. I looked at it every which way and I couldn't figure out what was wrong with it. I think its how the bra is laying.

Squee. Thanks.

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Ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight? - Joker.

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:iconfunkman1987:
My critique... the hands suck :lol:

Isis's left hand isn't that bad though, actually. Only problem is that it's too big. Isis's pants also seems like they're a piece of cardboard put against her legs lol. You gave it a 2-Dimensional appearance. Nadia's boob problem is that you drew them like as if she's leaning, but her body is still standing straight up. :lol:

Other than that, I don't know much about the characters, so I can't see as much as Kay. Like about Isis's tail and stuffs. 8B

Also... a job well done dear! It's still a good drawing, just some imperfections in it. :lol:

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
- Albert Einstein (1879-1955)
:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
Well thankies.

Yeah...just noticed the pants after you said that about them. *winces* I forgot to pen over some stuff...ick. Ah well. lol

Thanks for the kind crit dearie. It makes me happeh.

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:iconundashable:
Her mouth isn't right. She doesn't have stitches. Stitches came from boredom during the batman rp we did. Regular Isis doesn't have stitches, she ripped them out right in front of a crying Priya just because she wouldn't stop asking if she was okay. Isis's mouth is just a plain line that's ragged on the edges. Though she has piercings on the ends to keep it together because she couldn't talk right for a while without them, the she liked them and kept them in.

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98% of deviants don't know the difference between 'your' and 'you're'.
If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch the 98% in the face, put this in your signature.

I want to hurt those people...

I go on gaia and fanfiction too.
:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
Mmmm...k.

Tell the truth I rember that pictured you drew and showed me. It was human Isis. I based the mouth and hair off that, the mouth had stitches I do beleive.

But kk. Got ya.

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:iconfunkman1987:
lolz, it's no problem hun. Just trying to be helpful. :lol:

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
- Albert Einstein (1879-1955)
:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
Indeed~

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Ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight? - Joker.

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:iconundashable:
They weren't stitches, but I had forgotten to put the little ball things that hold the peircing in place, the probably looked like stitches, I'm sorry for the confusion. *Goes off to fix it*

--
98% of deviants don't know the difference between 'your' and 'you're'.
If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch the 98% in the face, put this in your signature.

I want to hurt those people...

I go on gaia and fanfiction too.

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